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I want to know. How it feels, when your name unfolds on my tongue, chanted, left in breath, invoking - to linger in thought, not just spoken, but felt, when it calls to just be close, and present. Breathing out, slowly, in gravity, let it sink, deepen, descend - to another level, to another question is it too much, or less than enough? Because what you ask might reveal more than you mean, more than the answer can ever hold. I want to know. How it curls behind closed lips, not to hurt, but left unspoken in the hollow of my ribs. How it feels, when it marks, grabs your neck, holds your pulse, takes your breath not just with teeth of hands, but with freedom of not holding back. What it does, open the mouth. Silence follows, shuts the eye to half, and let it just breathe. Pulse. Slowing down. Freeze - in the moment of heat. And after, when felt in the gut, with memory and weight. Resonates. Like an echo of you, in me. A midday longing. Leaves nothing... to hide, to prove - but stays.
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Sep 4, 2025
Sep 4, 2025 at 10:00 AM UTC
Casting Without Names.
I want to know. How it feels, when your name unfolds on my tongue, chanted, left in breath, invoking - to linger in thought, not just spoken, but felt, when it calls to just be close, and present. Breathing out, slowly, in gravity, let it sink, deepen, descend - to another level, to another question is it too much, or less than enough? Because what you ask might reveal more than you mean, more than the answer can ever hold. I want to know. How it curls behind closed lips, not to hurt, but left unspoken in the hollow of my ribs. How it feels, when it marks, grabs your neck, holds your pulse, takes your breath not just with teeth of hands, but with freedom of not holding back. What it does, open the mouth. Silence follows, shuts the eye to half, and let it just breathe. Pulse. Slowing down. Freeze - in the moment of heat. And after, when felt in the gut, with memory and weight. Resonates. Like an echo of you, in me. A midday longing. Leaves nothing... to hide, to prove - but stays.
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43/M/Hungary
Sep 4, 2025
Sep 4, 2025 at 10:00 AM UTC
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