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Flabbergasted, the whale wails Lonely upon the sea drifting ever apart A sole ****** raises his tired sails Forever trapped in solitary solace Winds warping the canvas While ominous clouds encroach The salty breeze stinging his taste A bitterness within the calm Peace drowns with the fury That the storm has yet to bring Fear not, creature of the sea The troublesome life is far from over Another night trashing about The rock and the roll of the bow A lullaby to a tired soul Slowly rocking to dreamless sleep
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Jan 12, 2013
Jan 12, 2013 at 12:23 AM UTC
Sailor at Sea
Flabbergasted, the whale wails Lonely upon the sea drifting ever apart A sole ****** raises his tired sails Forever trapped in solitary solace Winds warping the canvas While ominous clouds encroach The salty breeze stinging his taste A bitterness within the calm Peace drowns with the fury That the storm has yet to bring Fear not, creature of the sea The troublesome life is far from over Another night trashing about The rock and the roll of the bow A lullaby to a tired soul Slowly rocking to dreamless sleep
An odd view of a seemingly simple poem... the ****** is actually dead. he is in his afterlife (though neither heaven nor hell). he lived a life forever wanting a girl he could never have and thus is drifting off at sea with nothing more around him than the call of a lonely whale.
jacobo-raymundo
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Jan 12, 2013
Jan 12, 2013 at 12:23 AM UTC
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