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Up, down, all around, Twirling, whirling, blurs of sound, Din of colours, clashing loud, Speed rushing, Time pulling, Air flowing, Gliding upwards, Sky so blue, Flying downwards, See you soon, Laughter floating all around, Scents dancing home from town, Pink clouds sold on sticks, Enchanted by magic tricks, Music falling to the ground, Happiness all around.
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May 20, 2013
May 20, 2013 at 2:14 AM UTC
Carnivals & Rollercoasters
Up, down, all around, Twirling, whirling, blurs of sound, Din of colours, clashing loud, Speed rushing, Time pulling, Air flowing, Gliding upwards, Sky so blue, Flying downwards, See you soon, Laughter floating all around, Scents dancing home from town, Pink clouds sold on sticks, Enchanted by magic tricks, Music falling to the ground, Happiness all around.
Might I say, without appearing too proud, that I am sincerely pleased with how this turned out? Please leave good comments, with helpful, constructive criticism.
rosalind-hawkins
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May 20, 2013
May 20, 2013 at 2:14 AM UTC
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