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A world that is stuck in the past Maybe just in the vast We don't know it, yet we can't help but stare I don't think it's fair How can something so light, so cold, so dangerous Could be so vaporous Its rings are so beautiful and remind us that time is a circle It's so eternal Maybe each rock is a soul Along a long and treacherous path that we didn't enroll for Time does eat all his children after they're born The dead bodies of its children look so beautiful Maybe that's why we look so pitiful Next to it, they were so small Maybe that's why we're so enthralled in its white and coffee brown colors Maybe that's why it looks like two lovers embraced, holding on to each other, mixing, becoming one Maybe they're the only ones that won That's why it's a world of gas from the past stuck in the vast we're encased In the glass, watching them become one
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Mar 9
Mar 9, 2026 at 10:37 AM UTC
A World Of Gas From The Past.
A world that is stuck in the past Maybe just in the vast We don't know it, yet we can't help but stare I don't think it's fair How can something so light, so cold, so dangerous Could be so vaporous Its rings are so beautiful and remind us that time is a circle It's so eternal Maybe each rock is a soul Along a long and treacherous path that we didn't enroll for Time does eat all his children after they're born The dead bodies of its children look so beautiful Maybe that's why we look so pitiful Next to it, they were so small Maybe that's why we're so enthralled in its white and coffee brown colors Maybe that's why it looks like two lovers embraced, holding on to each other, mixing, becoming one Maybe they're the only ones that won That's why it's a world of gas from the past stuck in the vast we're encased In the glass, watching them become one
kinda connects to my buddy's poem about Neptune :3 its called "The Blue Sky Trapped In One"
7-Flavors-Of-Bones
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Mar 9
Mar 9, 2026 at 10:37 AM UTC
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