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The eclipse lasts shortly, And the moon shines Merely because of the Sun's rays. The moon may be gorgeous, But everything it got Was a gift from Sun. Without it's gold spreading across the sky, The moon is invisible. That's why a Moon Could never compete with a Sun.
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May 22, 2018
May 22, 2018 at 6:23 PM UTC
Sun's kisses [response poem]
The eclipse lasts shortly, And the moon shines Merely because of the Sun's rays. The moon may be gorgeous, But everything it got Was a gift from Sun. Without it's gold spreading across the sky, The moon is invisible. That's why a Moon Could never compete with a Sun.
This poem was a respond to Sky who wrote Eclipse, hope you like it. ♥ The moon shines only because it reflects Sun's light, remember that.
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May 22, 2018
May 22, 2018 at 6:23 PM UTC
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