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Him and her, He and she, Fell together into each other guarded hearts. He loved her and she loved him. But sacrifices had to be made and who would it be that sacrificed themselves? The trick, the real unfortunate fact, is that they both sacrificed themselves. They became who they thought the other needed them to be. And in this selfless act, each lost themselves and the love with which they first acted on. He was no longer what she needed and she was no longer what he needed. In this selfless act of snuffing out their own selves, they killed the love that they first snuffed for. And that tragedy, that could be the end. (but it wasn’t, she is thrilled to say.)
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Nov 24, 2014
Nov 24, 2014 at 1:13 AM UTC
Simple Tragedy
Him and her, He and she, Fell together into each other guarded hearts. He loved her and she loved him. But sacrifices had to be made and who would it be that sacrificed themselves? The trick, the real unfortunate fact, is that they both sacrificed themselves. They became who they thought the other needed them to be. And in this selfless act, each lost themselves and the love with which they first acted on. He was no longer what she needed and she was no longer what he needed. In this selfless act of snuffing out their own selves, they killed the love that they first snuffed for. And that tragedy, that could be the end. (but it wasn’t, she is thrilled to say.)
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Nov 24, 2014
Nov 24, 2014 at 1:13 AM UTC
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