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REFERENCE: A blue flame colour means complete combustion. This indicates that the gas is being burned efficiently without any unburned and wasted gas. A red or yellow flame is a flame being starved of oxygen, creating incomplete combustion. BLUE FLAMIN' You came to me in a slow burnin’ way Parched and left to decay A starved of oxygen kind of soul Across the floor, through the door Your face came into view All alone in a ghostly hue An ignition of interest An unexpected spark A small yellow flame Slow and steady from first mark Catching and burning Tender in motion and rising high More air, you burned fast Yellow flamin’ up to the sky There for a while. Glimpses of the blue flame A phantom in fright Written by Marcela Guajardo 6th March, 2021
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Mar 10, 2021
Mar 10, 2021 at 3:33 AM UTC
Blue Flamin'
REFERENCE: A blue flame colour means complete combustion. This indicates that the gas is being burned efficiently without any unburned and wasted gas. A red or yellow flame is a flame being starved of oxygen, creating incomplete combustion. BLUE FLAMIN' You came to me in a slow burnin’ way Parched and left to decay A starved of oxygen kind of soul Across the floor, through the door Your face came into view All alone in a ghostly hue An ignition of interest An unexpected spark A small yellow flame Slow and steady from first mark Catching and burning Tender in motion and rising high More air, you burned fast Yellow flamin’ up to the sky There for a while. Glimpses of the blue flame A phantom in fright Written by Marcela Guajardo 6th March, 2021
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Mar 10, 2021
Mar 10, 2021 at 3:33 AM UTC
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