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10-1000

10th of November was

9 days before school started back, and there were

8 thousand words I should have been writing at

7 pm that night because I had

6 papers due but I thought about you until

5 minutes before school and be

4 I knew it you were mine and

3 drinks later I was way too drunk

2 walk myself home and you were the nice

1 who made sure I was okay and my heart went from

0 to 60 everytime you smiled at me.

1 week later at

2 in the morning, you called me, and the

3rd times the charm, I asked you to marry me

4 life because it was barely

5 degrees outside and I was falling for you out of

6 billion people in the world, despite only knowing you for

7 weeks. And now

8 more months later, and

900 days since I told you I loved you, and I thank God for the

1000 days I had with you these two and a half years.

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Written by
shane-carmichael
American
Published
Nov 28, 2011
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