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Phrasing, you say Is imperative— Parse, perfect, punctuate. Language, you say Should be philharmonic— Finessed, finished. Speaking, you say Should be lucid— Listen. Silence, you say is a run-on sentence and should never be left in the air because it's not comfortable when you can hear the clang of the heating vents and the click of you there third row playing with pens and the tick of the clock as nearer grows a time when the gates of this false laboratory will whoosh open to a windy world and the hush in your head and of cinderblock, whitewashed will be no more.
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Sep 3, 2014
Sep 3, 2014 at 6:12 PM UTC
Grammar School
Phrasing, you say Is imperative— Parse, perfect, punctuate. Language, you say Should be philharmonic— Finessed, finished. Speaking, you say Should be lucid— Listen. Silence, you say is a run-on sentence and should never be left in the air because it's not comfortable when you can hear the clang of the heating vents and the click of you there third row playing with pens and the tick of the clock as nearer grows a time when the gates of this false laboratory will whoosh open to a windy world and the hush in your head and of cinderblock, whitewashed will be no more.
abigail-ella
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Sep 3, 2014
Sep 3, 2014 at 6:12 PM UTC
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