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my head hangs low my eyelids flutter these shaking knees are collapsing quickly and there is no ground to catch my escape my mind lays blank and no tears are left but my heart is racing like when we met yet this time, there’s a valley in the center of you I quaked your land re-shaping what you were and now you’re divided jaggedly with no hope of reeling your two parts back together. my vanity has broken you apart my pride pulled me away and just like you, I’m left in half but my good has gone to grey. needles and pins infest my feet, my prickling hairs stand tall, even now, in all this mess I have your back against the wall. Sorry can’t be a real word when I don’t even know what it means but I’m sorry that you fell in love and so sorry she was me.
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Jun 21, 2011
Jun 21, 2011 at 10:34 PM UTC
Deep Valleys
my head hangs low my eyelids flutter these shaking knees are collapsing quickly and there is no ground to catch my escape my mind lays blank and no tears are left but my heart is racing like when we met yet this time, there’s a valley in the center of you I quaked your land re-shaping what you were and now you’re divided jaggedly with no hope of reeling your two parts back together. my vanity has broken you apart my pride pulled me away and just like you, I’m left in half but my good has gone to grey. needles and pins infest my feet, my prickling hairs stand tall, even now, in all this mess I have your back against the wall. Sorry can’t be a real word when I don’t even know what it means but I’m sorry that you fell in love and so sorry she was me.
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Jun 21, 2011
Jun 21, 2011 at 10:34 PM UTC
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