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When we set forth, the breeze blew fair, The sun shone balmy, warm. Our sheets were fixed; sail filled with air, No warning of the storm. Our crew of two, so cheerfully, With confidence untried, Thought we could lick the strongest sea And still enjoy the ride. In dinghy small: in ocean great Our tiny course still true. We charted stars to navigate; From Heaven took our cue. And so we cruised for many years, Successful in our tour. With frequent laughter, scarcer tears, The partnership secure. But one night when the stars were gone And clouds obscured our view, A gust surprised us, struck head-on And blew the mast askew. In darkness thick, with rising surge, We struggled with the sail. The waves now threatened to submerge Our vessel in the gale. We could not see to douse or reef And so we grappled, blind; Our crew of two, in disbelief Left buoyancy behind. The dinghy tossed like wreckage now And, hope so far from sight, We tried once more and then, somehow, Our crew began to fight. Through foam and froth and swelling wave Our agitation grew. Each violent blast a cause to rave, To quarrel, stage a coup. Our crew of two, now one-on-one, Not just against the squall Attacked each other ‘til undone, A rebel’s free-for-all. So will we drown in waters vast This tempest take our souls? And, sinking, will we still lambaste Each other’s weak controls? Or could we, if we changed our tack And pulled together, firm, Outlast this storm, this inky black, Our partnership affirm? Oh, please, let’s try, although the sky Above is dire and grim. You take an oar and so will I, Together scull and skim. I’ll call you “Captain;” call me “Mate.” We’ll rally, make amends. And, crew of two, we’ll navigate This stormy night as friends.
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Feb 17, 2017
Feb 17, 2017 at 8:23 PM UTC
Ballad: Our Crew of Two
When we set forth, the breeze blew fair, The sun shone balmy, warm. Our sheets were fixed; sail filled with air, No warning of the storm. Our crew of two, so cheerfully, With confidence untried, Thought we could lick the strongest sea And still enjoy the ride. In dinghy small: in ocean great Our tiny course still true. We charted stars to navigate; From Heaven took our cue. And so we cruised for many years, Successful in our tour. With frequent laughter, scarcer tears, The partnership secure. But one night when the stars were gone And clouds obscured our view, A gust surprised us, struck head-on And blew the mast askew. In darkness thick, with rising surge, We struggled with the sail. The waves now threatened to submerge Our vessel in the gale. We could not see to douse or reef And so we grappled, blind; Our crew of two, in disbelief Left buoyancy behind. The dinghy tossed like wreckage now And, hope so far from sight, We tried once more and then, somehow, Our crew began to fight. Through foam and froth and swelling wave Our agitation grew. Each violent blast a cause to rave, To quarrel, stage a coup. Our crew of two, now one-on-one, Not just against the squall Attacked each other ‘til undone, A rebel’s free-for-all. So will we drown in waters vast This tempest take our souls? And, sinking, will we still lambaste Each other’s weak controls? Or could we, if we changed our tack And pulled together, firm, Outlast this storm, this inky black, Our partnership affirm? Oh, please, let’s try, although the sky Above is dire and grim. You take an oar and so will I, Together scull and skim. I’ll call you “Captain;” call me “Mate.” We’ll rally, make amends. And, crew of two, we’ll navigate This stormy night as friends.
I was pleased to have this poem featured in the 2017 Valentine's Day edition of the Epoch Times (pg C03)
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Feb 17, 2017
Feb 17, 2017 at 8:23 PM UTC
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