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At times, Cold departures leave A stain of faith. You're departure, However hellish, Remains immaculate, Even as you turn With a blizzard on your heel, Kicking Winter in My eye. You replace him up there. Not in piety but In hierarchy, Of the royal void breed. I tailor the nails to your palm And broken foot. Drying like slaughterhouse Meat on my clothesline. I found our nature Profoundly meaningless. Was it transcendence? Algor Mortis? Or did my new eyes Survive incubation? I await the birth pangs Of sight, Callousing the whole, From lid to lash.
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Aug 4, 2014
Aug 4, 2014 at 10:34 PM UTC
Callus
At times, Cold departures leave A stain of faith. You're departure, However hellish, Remains immaculate, Even as you turn With a blizzard on your heel, Kicking Winter in My eye. You replace him up there. Not in piety but In hierarchy, Of the royal void breed. I tailor the nails to your palm And broken foot. Drying like slaughterhouse Meat on my clothesline. I found our nature Profoundly meaningless. Was it transcendence? Algor Mortis? Or did my new eyes Survive incubation? I await the birth pangs Of sight, Callousing the whole, From lid to lash.
My brother asked if this was about Jesus so I thought I should clarify that it is not, and I'm not Christian. This is about making something/someone (lover,parent,friend,addiction) into something almighty and overpowering, but seeing them differently by the end (the departure) and not knowing if it's them who is different or your perspective (new eyes).
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Aug 4, 2014
Aug 4, 2014 at 10:34 PM UTC
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