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I float on by I float on by up up away in spaces beyond the planes of existence & when I cry I wish this time would speed up we just don’t know where I’ve been or how far I’ll go because I float on by I float on by Confined by my thoughts as I want to stop this elongation patiently racing forcing destinations into place when people’s faces are shadowed shallow traces of waters carving the canyons within myself drowning I float on by I float on by
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Dec 24, 2011
Dec 24, 2011 at 6:20 PM UTC
Float on by
I float on by I float on by up up away in spaces beyond the planes of existence & when I cry I wish this time would speed up we just don’t know where I’ve been or how far I’ll go because I float on by I float on by Confined by my thoughts as I want to stop this elongation patiently racing forcing destinations into place when people’s faces are shadowed shallow traces of waters carving the canyons within myself drowning I float on by I float on by
Not sure about the title. Greatly inspired/influenced by "Learn from this Mistake" by Down.
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Dec 24, 2011
Dec 24, 2011 at 6:20 PM UTC
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