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I'm a dog with a broken spine Watch me while I bleed inside. I am a dog with a broken spine Watch me die, me die inside. I am the dog with a broken spine My legs drag behind me like a lie, My long nose droops to the ground It was love that I never found. My name is dog with the broken spine I ache in myself, myself ache in I, My bones crumble under life, I was once worth your time. Call me the dog with a broken spine I will rot 'till the day I die, I will never again survive What you have done to me. They say I'm a dog with a broken spine I bare my teeth in imaginary fright, I am bark but no bite, I bite tonight But I don't know why I bite. I am the dog with the broken spine, Abandoned under the spiky pine Left to rot in the world of "I" , I am called the dog with a broken spine. @dumba
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Mar 21
Mar 21, 2026 at 4:17 AM UTC
DOG.
I'm a dog with a broken spine Watch me while I bleed inside. I am a dog with a broken spine Watch me die, me die inside. I am the dog with a broken spine My legs drag behind me like a lie, My long nose droops to the ground It was love that I never found. My name is dog with the broken spine I ache in myself, myself ache in I, My bones crumble under life, I was once worth your time. Call me the dog with a broken spine I will rot 'till the day I die, I will never again survive What you have done to me. They say I'm a dog with a broken spine I bare my teeth in imaginary fright, I am bark but no bite, I bite tonight But I don't know why I bite. I am the dog with the broken spine, Abandoned under the spiky pine Left to rot in the world of "I" , I am called the dog with a broken spine. @dumba
This is one of my darkest and messiest poems that I would still consider something proper to my writing style. Feel free to interpret, and I would be glad to receive some feedback on this one.
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Mar 21
Mar 21, 2026 at 4:17 AM UTC
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