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*it is true when we give our blood too much we aid in disempowerment* 1. constant giving in love and providing can set unhealthy-precedent and when it falters in its expected-rhythm ugly-tantrums get thrown, bordering on disrespect 2. demands kick in hard upon trod-floor of insidious-hooks there's always a rider for the other party on tightrope-theatre             some or other condition to feed the monster of excitement             while health straddles some jarring regions             in hostile-spitting strong enough to lance startling-injury shoelaces dripped in hazard-oil over a generational-canyon provides unwanted-fodder for establishing long-term slippage **(no! you weren't raised this way.. where does this stem from?) there has been no failure to show how humans act and speak this is unacceptable)** oh............you want / you want / you want..... all.. the.. time then kick up unholy-storms when there's a break in rhyme *get ye, lad.. go practise your ire on a field                    go throw a stick on the prairie                    go find your path, you're old enough yer insolence plain ***** (I could tell you .. you're rude.. go home, but you already are!) S T - 10 dec 13
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Dec 10, 2013
Dec 10, 2013 at 12:00 PM UTC
disempowerment
*it is true when we give our blood too much we aid in disempowerment* 1. constant giving in love and providing can set unhealthy-precedent and when it falters in its expected-rhythm ugly-tantrums get thrown, bordering on disrespect 2. demands kick in hard upon trod-floor of insidious-hooks there's always a rider for the other party on tightrope-theatre             some or other condition to feed the monster of excitement             while health straddles some jarring regions             in hostile-spitting strong enough to lance startling-injury shoelaces dripped in hazard-oil over a generational-canyon provides unwanted-fodder for establishing long-term slippage **(no! you weren't raised this way.. where does this stem from?) there has been no failure to show how humans act and speak this is unacceptable)** oh............you want / you want / you want..... all.. the.. time then kick up unholy-storms when there's a break in rhyme *get ye, lad.. go practise your ire on a field                    go throw a stick on the prairie                    go find your path, you're old enough yer insolence plain ***** (I could tell you .. you're rude.. go home, but you already are!) S T - 10 dec 13
sometimes, offspring understand little of scpacrfieces parents have to (sometimes, privately) make in order to keep the wheels turning............. it needs hair on teeth and grit in mouth to swallow some stuff, but persevere against adversity.. not always flippin' easy. to teach independence and responsibility to children is a constant and ongoing thing.. one can hardly let up.. yeah, I guess it's the old adage of repetition, repetition, repetition ... (there's a poem I half-remember.... about parents letting go of their offspring... natural pattern..) sub: stuck between jagged-rocks and petulant-push how breathes a soul stuck in places where no space moves? reach for the blue one.. then, a white one later.. three small ones wooden wheels of erstwhile-splendour interest little to jelly already set in gratifix skull goes numb in efforts can't keep placating, no wrong to wring neck of bird who feeds well the keeper who keeps warm the feeder who helps to lift the spirit
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Dec 10, 2013
Dec 10, 2013 at 12:00 PM UTC
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