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electric night, an unreal moon- shining like pouring white wine, making the air intoxicating; in the canoe the girl and i rowing along the calm backwaters. water birds with snake like necks mating noisly in water beds make us curious, we stopped the canoe, near a moon lit creeper thatched grove. the girl was wide eyed and wild, caught me by my waist and said: 'you should have done this first' ( i was a silly idot, moon struck, with only poetry in my bonnet) we fell in to that rosy pit, without an end, and i got grounded, delighted hearing her wild ecstatic outburst.
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Jan 11, 2012
Jan 11, 2012 at 9:10 AM UTC
eletric night journal
electric night, an unreal moon- shining like pouring white wine, making the air intoxicating; in the canoe the girl and i rowing along the calm backwaters. water birds with snake like necks mating noisly in water beds make us curious, we stopped the canoe, near a moon lit creeper thatched grove. the girl was wide eyed and wild, caught me by my waist and said: 'you should have done this first' ( i was a silly idot, moon struck, with only poetry in my bonnet) we fell in to that rosy pit, without an end, and i got grounded, delighted hearing her wild ecstatic outburst.
k-balachandran
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Jan 11, 2012
Jan 11, 2012 at 9:10 AM UTC
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