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Shrouded thoughts of being pessimistic, Because everyone's preaching to be realistic. So people let their dreams die, As they open their eyes. But me, I rather hit that snooze, Because I don't want to lose, My deliberation or concentration. Resurrected from ignorance, As I close my eyes, So my dreams won't die. I begin my days hitting that snooze, Even though they tell me to wake up, Because reality is a shock. I wake up only to hit that snooze, Because it hurts more to let dreams die. So in pain, I refuse to lie, With restless nights. Living with dead dreams, Facing insomnia. Its something I can't accept, So no regrets. So let my dreams live on, So I can at least lay rested in peace.
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Oct 31, 2013
Oct 31, 2013 at 8:40 AM UTC
Life on Snooze
Shrouded thoughts of being pessimistic, Because everyone's preaching to be realistic. So people let their dreams die, As they open their eyes. But me, I rather hit that snooze, Because I don't want to lose, My deliberation or concentration. Resurrected from ignorance, As I close my eyes, So my dreams won't die. I begin my days hitting that snooze, Even though they tell me to wake up, Because reality is a shock. I wake up only to hit that snooze, Because it hurts more to let dreams die. So in pain, I refuse to lie, With restless nights. Living with dead dreams, Facing insomnia. Its something I can't accept, So no regrets. So let my dreams live on, So I can at least lay rested in peace.
By myself and Sidney Conway. My favorite line  "In pain I refuse to lie," by Sidney complemented by my line "with restless nights" using lie as a pun. A great example of divergent thinking.
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Oct 31, 2013
Oct 31, 2013 at 8:40 AM UTC
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