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I new something was wrong Everything seemed so real So unconditional Almost too good to be true I was obsessively inlove You new it, you took advantage of my summer hot love Your Hypnotizing winter froze my summer time breeze. My heart in a center, your icicle stabbed right through it several times freezing my summer bleeding heart almost falling apart but still kept together frozen with open wounds You were so cold my heart felt it even in the deepest vain that was once alive . I felt it throb in pain and you felt no sympathetic emotion. I was still frozen after a couple of years you won't let me unfreeze . I started to find comfort in the pain and realized that you didn't want to let me go. I loved you . Gave in the last bit of my soul for you. You didn't care... You loved plenty... Broke hearts... I was just another.. Another heart you won't let mend But then I realized your the only thing holding me together Until you fall for someone else I'll be your submissive And after I'll live in the snow flakes of your winter storm waiting for the next new flake to finish the last bit of my heart.
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Dec 23, 2014
Dec 23, 2014 at 5:40 PM UTC
Cold hearted
I new something was wrong Everything seemed so real So unconditional Almost too good to be true I was obsessively inlove You new it, you took advantage of my summer hot love Your Hypnotizing winter froze my summer time breeze. My heart in a center, your icicle stabbed right through it several times freezing my summer bleeding heart almost falling apart but still kept together frozen with open wounds You were so cold my heart felt it even in the deepest vain that was once alive . I felt it throb in pain and you felt no sympathetic emotion. I was still frozen after a couple of years you won't let me unfreeze . I started to find comfort in the pain and realized that you didn't want to let me go. I loved you . Gave in the last bit of my soul for you. You didn't care... You loved plenty... Broke hearts... I was just another.. Another heart you won't let mend But then I realized your the only thing holding me together Until you fall for someone else I'll be your submissive And after I'll live in the snow flakes of your winter storm waiting for the next new flake to finish the last bit of my heart.
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Dec 23, 2014
Dec 23, 2014 at 5:40 PM UTC
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