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At sight, just this one bloom, that spectacularly spreads, it's warm purple petals wide above us, like a big benevolent lotus, causing  the magic of dawn and dusk, day after day,indefatigably! Galloping fast , then leading to a day,turning it different for each, an astonishing feat! Closes at night, claiming  back all radiance, he brought along, in between  deftly he addresses trillions of neurons at work  of every kind all alone; simply phenomenal! Isn't it an incredible everyday miracle? But do we ever thank the wonder bloom except the ancient sages who structured a mantra* to praise his astonishing gifts. Prime source of light for the humans, this! a wonder one of a kind, he sure is, well, till the day 'God decides to play dice', yet again!
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Oct 21, 2017
Oct 21, 2017 at 11:14 AM UTC
The lotus of life
At sight, just this one bloom, that spectacularly spreads, it's warm purple petals wide above us, like a big benevolent lotus, causing  the magic of dawn and dusk, day after day,indefatigably! Galloping fast , then leading to a day,turning it different for each, an astonishing feat! Closes at night, claiming  back all radiance, he brought along, in between  deftly he addresses trillions of neurons at work  of every kind all alone; simply phenomenal! Isn't it an incredible everyday miracle? But do we ever thank the wonder bloom except the ancient sages who structured a mantra* to praise his astonishing gifts. Prime source of light for the humans, this! a wonder one of a kind, he sure is, well, till the day 'God decides to play dice', yet again!
*Surya Gayatri--Hymns in salutation of the sun that stimulating brains and keeping the world alive, included in the ancient Indian texts Vedas called Surya Gayathri, Gayathri is the poetic meter in which hymn are structured.
k-balachandran
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Oct 21, 2017
Oct 21, 2017 at 11:14 AM UTC
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