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Her eyes a steelyard grey,watched me in the bar today,saw me drink,made me think there'd be hell to pay if I said hello and offered to buy her a bourbon or rye and then she swaggered up to me and said,'anytime you're free hunk, you're welcome to take a chunk ,a slice,I'm nice, of me,be my guest and don't be shy,you're not shy are you guy?' I left rapido, head held real low and ears turned red by other things the steelyard grey eyed woman said. I'm not a ***** but she was downright rotten rude and anyway what would my mam say,if I took a girl like that to Mothers flat for tea? She'd say, I'm mad,that girl is bad, best get shot of that bad lot and there's not a lot that I can say except she was kind of **** in a steelyard grey way.
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Sep 4, 2013
Sep 4, 2013 at 3:33 PM UTC
Corby town
Her eyes a steelyard grey,watched me in the bar today,saw me drink,made me think there'd be hell to pay if I said hello and offered to buy her a bourbon or rye and then she swaggered up to me and said,'anytime you're free hunk, you're welcome to take a chunk ,a slice,I'm nice, of me,be my guest and don't be shy,you're not shy are you guy?' I left rapido, head held real low and ears turned red by other things the steelyard grey eyed woman said. I'm not a ***** but she was downright rotten rude and anyway what would my mam say,if I took a girl like that to Mothers flat for tea? She'd say, I'm mad,that girl is bad, best get shot of that bad lot and there's not a lot that I can say except she was kind of **** in a steelyard grey way.
john-edward-smallshaw
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Sep 4, 2013
Sep 4, 2013 at 3:33 PM UTC
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