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"I think ***** may be a tragic hero," A student said, "Linda tells her boys he is an average man, And it's time for average men to be attended. That he gets up and goes to work each day Is enough to make him a hero." We listen in the darkened room, Breaking to think our thoughts aloud Before we dive back into the pool Of Loman miseries: The braggart wearing down, The cringing rage against The darning of socks, Silken stocking memories, Naughtiness recapitulated. And sons spinning round The vortex edge, Wondering whether To bail or pledge.... The stage is growing dark, The audience darker, Receding from bright memories, Nobility's idyllic days denied, Nothing left but the emptiness of pride. Accepting brassiness and braggadocio, We lean, breathless beneath skyscrapers, Accepting commission-only pay, The emptiness of false news, And mediocre heroes. "Boys! The woods are burning! Can't you understand? There's a big blaze going all around!" But no one understands. We are all dreamers, Hoping America makes us great again, Wishing to live the Salesman's life, Willing to leave Plan B hidden Behind the fusebox for now... If only hope remains, If only champagne wishes, Caviar dreams besot us in our schemes. "Nobody dast blame this man!" Says Charlie, and he is right. It's tough being out there Living on a wing and a prayer, Promising the moon, Promised the moon, Age coming on, No seeds planted, No sun to shine On what's left Of the garden.... A little salary, A smile, A shoeshine, Cannot suffice. Believing dreams that lie Is no reason to live; Seeing the blue sky alone Is no reason, If there's nothing to own, And no place to call home.
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Mar 13, 2017
Mar 13, 2017 at 4:20 PM UTC
***** Loman
"I think ***** may be a tragic hero," A student said, "Linda tells her boys he is an average man, And it's time for average men to be attended. That he gets up and goes to work each day Is enough to make him a hero." We listen in the darkened room, Breaking to think our thoughts aloud Before we dive back into the pool Of Loman miseries: The braggart wearing down, The cringing rage against The darning of socks, Silken stocking memories, Naughtiness recapitulated. And sons spinning round The vortex edge, Wondering whether To bail or pledge.... The stage is growing dark, The audience darker, Receding from bright memories, Nobility's idyllic days denied, Nothing left but the emptiness of pride. Accepting brassiness and braggadocio, We lean, breathless beneath skyscrapers, Accepting commission-only pay, The emptiness of false news, And mediocre heroes. "Boys! The woods are burning! Can't you understand? There's a big blaze going all around!" But no one understands. We are all dreamers, Hoping America makes us great again, Wishing to live the Salesman's life, Willing to leave Plan B hidden Behind the fusebox for now... If only hope remains, If only champagne wishes, Caviar dreams besot us in our schemes. "Nobody dast blame this man!" Says Charlie, and he is right. It's tough being out there Living on a wing and a prayer, Promising the moon, Promised the moon, Age coming on, No seeds planted, No sun to shine On what's left Of the garden.... A little salary, A smile, A shoeshine, Cannot suffice. Believing dreams that lie Is no reason to live; Seeing the blue sky alone Is no reason, If there's nothing to own, And no place to call home.
Dreamers and Schemers.... ***** Biff, and Happy. Linda Loman. Charlie and Bernard. A woman, and what passes for an empty man....
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Mar 13, 2017
Mar 13, 2017 at 4:20 PM UTC
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