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Early morning mist in the field. Fresh air on her face as she walked along the track. Cows mooed from the farm. A pheasant called from the wood. She waited to see if he came up to the farm. He said he came early to the farm for the milk. She waited sensing the early air into her lungs. Rooks called from the trees tops overhead. She had left her parents asleep in bed. They wouldn't stir yet awhile. She saw him come up the path carrying the green jug for the milk. She felt excitement inside. When he saw her he smiled and walked towards her. “You're early” he said and moved to her and they hugged and kissed. “Thought I'd come meet you” she said after the kiss and hug. He looked round at the early morning view. “Had breakfast?” he said. “No not yet” she replied. He took her hand and they walked along the path to the dairy. They could hear the cows mooing louder. The black farm dog barked at them as they went into the diary but skulked away when the cowman bellowed at him. “You're early” the cowman said taking the jug and filling it with milk from a huge container. “Best part of the day” Benny said. “Guess it is” the cowman said. They walked off along the path away from the farm. He held the jug with both hands as it was quite heavy. She walked beside him getting as near to him as she could. “Want some breakfast at my parents' place?” he said. “Will they mind?” she said. He shook his head. “No of course not” he said. They walked through part of the wood and down the narrow path to the cottage. Rooks called loudly from the wood as they went in the garden gate. They went in the back door and he placed the milk on the side in the kitchen. His mother was there raking the stove. He asked about breakfast for Jane and his mother smiled and said yes. So they sat at the table together and his mother poured mugs of tea and hot porridge. She sensed his knee touch hers under the table. She wanted to kiss him but felt at that moment unable.
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Apr 14, 2018
Apr 14, 2018 at 1:47 AM UTC
Early One Morning 1961
Early morning mist in the field. Fresh air on her face as she walked along the track. Cows mooed from the farm. A pheasant called from the wood. She waited to see if he came up to the farm. He said he came early to the farm for the milk. She waited sensing the early air into her lungs. Rooks called from the trees tops overhead. She had left her parents asleep in bed. They wouldn't stir yet awhile. She saw him come up the path carrying the green jug for the milk. She felt excitement inside. When he saw her he smiled and walked towards her. “You're early” he said and moved to her and they hugged and kissed. “Thought I'd come meet you” she said after the kiss and hug. He looked round at the early morning view. “Had breakfast?” he said. “No not yet” she replied. He took her hand and they walked along the path to the dairy. They could hear the cows mooing louder. The black farm dog barked at them as they went into the diary but skulked away when the cowman bellowed at him. “You're early” the cowman said taking the jug and filling it with milk from a huge container. “Best part of the day” Benny said. “Guess it is” the cowman said. They walked off along the path away from the farm. He held the jug with both hands as it was quite heavy. She walked beside him getting as near to him as she could. “Want some breakfast at my parents' place?” he said. “Will they mind?” she said. He shook his head. “No of course not” he said. They walked through part of the wood and down the narrow path to the cottage. Rooks called loudly from the wood as they went in the garden gate. They went in the back door and he placed the milk on the side in the kitchen. His mother was there raking the stove. He asked about breakfast for Jane and his mother smiled and said yes. So they sat at the table together and his mother poured mugs of tea and hot porridge. She sensed his knee touch hers under the table. She wanted to kiss him but felt at that moment unable.
TerryCollett
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Apr 14, 2018
Apr 14, 2018 at 1:47 AM UTC
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