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I held tight my belongings afraid of everything and everyone I had this sense of not knowing where I'm from and where I should go everything passed by so quickly people running and screaming I just sat quietly staring at the tiffany blue coloured floor I smelled the pollution my nose hurting while breathing this must be what they mean when they say "it's hard living in the big city”
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Jan 22, 2023
Jan 22, 2023 at 8:20 PM UTC
lost on the subway
I held tight my belongings afraid of everything and everyone I had this sense of not knowing where I'm from and where I should go everything passed by so quickly people running and screaming I just sat quietly staring at the tiffany blue coloured floor I smelled the pollution my nose hurting while breathing this must be what they mean when they say "it's hard living in the big city”
i wrote it in like… less than 10 minutes? but it's based on a poem from 2021 left on my drafts that was so poorly written i talk about the first time i went to a big city all by myself and i was so so scared but everything went fine and i really enjoyed the subway rides
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Jan 22, 2023
Jan 22, 2023 at 8:20 PM UTC
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