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My old man was always neat and tidy. Brylcreemed hair (what was left), smart suit, shiny shoes, brown brogues, well trimmed moustache, staring eyes. Get your best shirt and trousers on, we're going to see this new Jeff Chandler film, Western, and put on that bow-tie I bought you and make sure your shoes are shiny, he said. I went and got changed and put on the bow-tie he bought(how I hated that thing) and shoes buffed to a shine of sorts, short trousers, the next to best, and I was ready, kissing mother on the way out. We went in the cinema a 1/3 of the way through the first feature, sat in the seats, his eyes fixed on the screen, I looking around to see who was in and who was who. I looked at him beside me; the neat moustache, well trimmed, the eyes watching the screen, a cigarette between lips, smoke rising. I recalled the time at another cinema, another film, another Western, and we were ¾ the way through, when he ups and leaves in a sudden rush. I watched the screen and chewed the popcorn, thinking the old man had gone to the bog, an adult thing or so I thought. Then 5 minutes after a young usherette came and found me and said: your father's with the medics in the foyer, he had a choking fit. Poor guy, I thought, him sat there blue and white, not having had a ****
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Jul 10, 2014
Jul 10, 2014 at 2:26 PM UTC
THE OLD MAN'S MISADVENTURE.
My old man was always neat and tidy. Brylcreemed hair (what was left), smart suit, shiny shoes, brown brogues, well trimmed moustache, staring eyes. Get your best shirt and trousers on, we're going to see this new Jeff Chandler film, Western, and put on that bow-tie I bought you and make sure your shoes are shiny, he said. I went and got changed and put on the bow-tie he bought(how I hated that thing) and shoes buffed to a shine of sorts, short trousers, the next to best, and I was ready, kissing mother on the way out. We went in the cinema a 1/3 of the way through the first feature, sat in the seats, his eyes fixed on the screen, I looking around to see who was in and who was who. I looked at him beside me; the neat moustache, well trimmed, the eyes watching the screen, a cigarette between lips, smoke rising. I recalled the time at another cinema, another film, another Western, and we were ¾ the way through, when he ups and leaves in a sudden rush. I watched the screen and chewed the popcorn, thinking the old man had gone to the bog, an adult thing or so I thought. Then 5 minutes after a young usherette came and found me and said: your father's with the medics in the foyer, he had a choking fit. Poor guy, I thought, him sat there blue and white, not having had a ****
A BOY AND HIS FATHER AT A CINEMA IN 1950S LONDON.
terry-collett
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Jul 10, 2014
Jul 10, 2014 at 2:26 PM UTC
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