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Going out in cars to find Whatever drives the artists mad Leaving all we had and Leaving all we had to give behind Leaving brushstrokes on a canvas With a paint that never dries Hoping only that the better parts Will flash before our eyes before we're Off again On a whim Going out in cars at night To have a highway to ourselves No we haven't got a map We're only going somewhere else And all the things we've yet to see Become the things we left behind It's worth it just to see that blur We'd rather travel than arrive No we haven't got a map And no we haven't got a plan But we're content to have our friends and some vague picture of the end That may well tear us all to shreds And though we really were content We found we felt far more than that Going out in cars with paint, if there's no way we'll take the one that we invent we never seemed that far away From what was falling into place Or from a fireplace and beds where we could rest our noisy heads before we're Off again On a whim Leaving all we had The goodbyes were sad Had we been standing still instead Had we been hiding from the rain Had we been lying in What passes for a home when we're afraid Could we have been content? With having years and years instead And trying not to hear the restless, reckless parts inside our heads Perhaps not yet Imagine when the noise is dim We open up the curtains just to find an unexpected and unwelcome lack of anything behind them. Perhaps not yet But I imagine on my deathbed I'd confess: I never felt the change And so we're Off again On a whim And though it's only my best guess I think what drove them mad was this: How do you find yourself if you're always somewhere else?
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Feb 15, 2013
Feb 15, 2013 at 6:12 PM UTC
Weighty Whims
Going out in cars to find Whatever drives the artists mad Leaving all we had and Leaving all we had to give behind Leaving brushstrokes on a canvas With a paint that never dries Hoping only that the better parts Will flash before our eyes before we're Off again On a whim Going out in cars at night To have a highway to ourselves No we haven't got a map We're only going somewhere else And all the things we've yet to see Become the things we left behind It's worth it just to see that blur We'd rather travel than arrive No we haven't got a map And no we haven't got a plan But we're content to have our friends and some vague picture of the end That may well tear us all to shreds And though we really were content We found we felt far more than that Going out in cars with paint, if there's no way we'll take the one that we invent we never seemed that far away From what was falling into place Or from a fireplace and beds where we could rest our noisy heads before we're Off again On a whim Leaving all we had The goodbyes were sad Had we been standing still instead Had we been hiding from the rain Had we been lying in What passes for a home when we're afraid Could we have been content? With having years and years instead And trying not to hear the restless, reckless parts inside our heads Perhaps not yet Imagine when the noise is dim We open up the curtains just to find an unexpected and unwelcome lack of anything behind them. Perhaps not yet But I imagine on my deathbed I'd confess: I never felt the change And so we're Off again On a whim And though it's only my best guess I think what drove them mad was this: How do you find yourself if you're always somewhere else?
These are some new lyrics that finally came together today after being only a scattered, but related assortment of lines scribbled in my journal.  I'd say it may be my favorite thing I've written yet.  Maybe.
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Feb 15, 2013
Feb 15, 2013 at 6:12 PM UTC
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