O evergreen, your beauty maintained
Throughout the winter spring and autumn
A steadfast tree, the same today,
The same tomorrow, the same next month
And if all bides well
The same next year.
No fiery red to shed in autumn
No leaves in piles around
Just green upon your branches
For now and evermore.
Nov 27, 2025
Nov 27, 2025 at 4:11 AM UTC
O evergreen, your beauty maintained
Throughout the winter spring and autumn
A steadfast tree, the same today,
The same tomorrow, the same next month
And if all bides well
The same next year.
No fiery red to shed in autumn
No leaves in piles around
Just green upon your branches
For now and evermore.
Another “early work” criticism appreciated.
