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Vivid demise guides Me; can anyone hear me? Why won't you save me? What numbs me worthless, The vast veer of intention, Why won't it take me? Evolve existence, Into inaudible cries For mental relief-
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May 18, 2018
May 18, 2018 at 11:06 AM UTC
Vast Veer Of Impression
Vivid demise guides Me; can anyone hear me? Why won't you save me? What numbs me worthless, The vast veer of intention, Why won't it take me? Evolve existence, Into inaudible cries For mental relief-
I've been working on long poems, with these stories, I kinda just wanted to make something small, but with a bigger meaning. I hope I did that in this one. All feedback is welcome and appreciated!
Carbon6_dio
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May 18, 2018
May 18, 2018 at 11:06 AM UTC
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