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If I summed you up I’d abstain from strained refrain, from those mushy lines that read like a hike through a swamp. An inkwell tipped, they pour from trite lips and taint a masterpiece. But you were not made to bathe in black cliché; you: the product of Someone’s fantastic oration; spoken to life, left in my sight. And I, but the by-chance observer, who only knows what not to say.
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Feb 6, 2010
Feb 6, 2010 at 2:45 PM UTC
Loss for Words
If I summed you up I’d abstain from strained refrain, from those mushy lines that read like a hike through a swamp. An inkwell tipped, they pour from trite lips and taint a masterpiece. But you were not made to bathe in black cliché; you: the product of Someone’s fantastic oration; spoken to life, left in my sight. And I, but the by-chance observer, who only knows what not to say.
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Feb 6, 2010
Feb 6, 2010 at 2:45 PM UTC
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