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In our eighth year as friends, we reached a little further between sheets, bleached white and starched, in the contrived ambiance of a hotel room. More cautious than nervous, we peeled to bare flesh and proceeded slowly, carefully, as though we might break our well-seasoned past with our fresh exploration. Both of us knew what we each always wanted— youthful tensions, now matured into full-scale desire— and pursued it, dismissing our prior reserve as unfounded. Our hands, warm beneath cotton and denim, explored contours, sought softness with increasing confidence. As trepidations diffused into a scene of two old friends, now new young lovers, she paused at a joke made in sharp contrast to our actions. We waited, long enough to inhale and share a glance before we both collapsed in laughter.
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Oct 29, 2010
Oct 29, 2010 at 7:49 AM UTC
The Joke
In our eighth year as friends, we reached a little further between sheets, bleached white and starched, in the contrived ambiance of a hotel room. More cautious than nervous, we peeled to bare flesh and proceeded slowly, carefully, as though we might break our well-seasoned past with our fresh exploration. Both of us knew what we each always wanted— youthful tensions, now matured into full-scale desire— and pursued it, dismissing our prior reserve as unfounded. Our hands, warm beneath cotton and denim, explored contours, sought softness with increasing confidence. As trepidations diffused into a scene of two old friends, now new young lovers, she paused at a joke made in sharp contrast to our actions. We waited, long enough to inhale and share a glance before we both collapsed in laughter.
I spent a lot of time on this piece. I am fairly pleased with the result.
ethan-taylor
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Oct 29, 2010
Oct 29, 2010 at 7:49 AM UTC
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