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10 was old to 5, 30 unreal, and 60 Archaic. That was really Magic. When you age Like a tree, It takes roots that stretch to hell To brace you against life's storms. Knowing you have time to waste, Knowing you'll waste it  - This is worse than being old Living in the shadow of the fact, What remains. Eventually the past will eclipse all light, It will put out the Great Fire whose embers Are the few remaining stars, and flames Are the withering galaxies, and the rest is char. Eventually, the Universe Will go to sleep Too.
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Oct 4, 2025
Oct 4, 2025 at 5:24 PM UTC
When we get old
10 was old to 5, 30 unreal, and 60 Archaic. That was really Magic. When you age Like a tree, It takes roots that stretch to hell To brace you against life's storms. Knowing you have time to waste, Knowing you'll waste it  - This is worse than being old Living in the shadow of the fact, What remains. Eventually the past will eclipse all light, It will put out the Great Fire whose embers Are the few remaining stars, and flames Are the withering galaxies, and the rest is char. Eventually, the Universe Will go to sleep Too.
Jasper
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Oct 4, 2025
Oct 4, 2025 at 5:24 PM UTC
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