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They rest all over whilst I was rooted to the ground, the water acting like superglue as my limbs stretched out. Towards the clumps of land rods of steal and wood weaved, to connect and ***** that which we call humanity. But there were abuse on the rods formed by hands who'd calloused hearts, poison coursing through their veins, but not a single thought was given for they were innocent in their brain. Said limbs and rods spiraled out, as nothing was left to chance, intertwining everyone's destiny in majestic flare and grace, grand like a ballerina's dance. But the poison was too corrosive, the termites were too much, as everything eroded, imploded, crumbled and buried under mounds of earth. But today is different, a new beginning, a new life. As if the gods have willed something better to arrive. Indeed they came: Ports forged from purity anew, where fresh legs are delivered and old legs whisked away. For no matter how dark it was, is, will be, even during the night, there always is and will be a pip of light.
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Jan 5, 2015
Jan 5, 2015 at 7:46 AM UTC
A Gift of What Was and What Will
They rest all over whilst I was rooted to the ground, the water acting like superglue as my limbs stretched out. Towards the clumps of land rods of steal and wood weaved, to connect and ***** that which we call humanity. But there were abuse on the rods formed by hands who'd calloused hearts, poison coursing through their veins, but not a single thought was given for they were innocent in their brain. Said limbs and rods spiraled out, as nothing was left to chance, intertwining everyone's destiny in majestic flare and grace, grand like a ballerina's dance. But the poison was too corrosive, the termites were too much, as everything eroded, imploded, crumbled and buried under mounds of earth. But today is different, a new beginning, a new life. As if the gods have willed something better to arrive. Indeed they came: Ports forged from purity anew, where fresh legs are delivered and old legs whisked away. For no matter how dark it was, is, will be, even during the night, there always is and will be a pip of light.
A poem I had to compose as our homework for Literature class. This was the assignment posted by our teacher: Think of a metaphor for your 2014, the year that was; and think of another metaphor for your 2015, the year that will be. Write a poem (at least 12 lines) using those 2 metaphors. Typewritten. Also write a 1-page explanatory paper explaining your poem and the metaphors/imagery you used.
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Jan 5, 2015
Jan 5, 2015 at 7:46 AM UTC
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