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Memories of you and I remain In times of insanity and when sane Both parties are responsible–to be blamed! Today’s portrait is what has become the outcome Our laughing roars filled the room Everyone’s expression said, “We’re doomed!” Denying is futile–the whole place went boom! But reminiscing now invites Cloud of Gloom Orange and pink blanketed the sky Cue: another is about to pass by To the train we’d greet, “Hi~!” The usual spots, yours and mine, Shrieked while we were on high Chat goes on ‘til the other said bye The next? No exemption! Pair of feet exercise in assumption Kinetic hands trap them in adoration Cloud 9 waltz in successive repetition Orange and pink blanketed the sky Cue: another is about to pass by To the train we’d greet, “Hi~!” The usual spot, mine, Am no longer able to occupy Only to find stranger’s beam so sly Thanks to her personality, voice like chime You and her turn buddies in no time While I stay on your side like a mime; That felt as if losing a dime That night insomnia attacked Your voices echoing made me whacked– A virus marched into the brain via hack Caused the insides to curse **** These insecurities plan no turning back Reality presented my fear: Your orbs wiggle while I am here When you did a scan for her Out crying one thing clear I’ve been replaced, my dear.
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Dec 18, 2016
Dec 18, 2016 at 4:17 PM UTC
Unboard the Train
Memories of you and I remain In times of insanity and when sane Both parties are responsible–to be blamed! Today’s portrait is what has become the outcome Our laughing roars filled the room Everyone’s expression said, “We’re doomed!” Denying is futile–the whole place went boom! But reminiscing now invites Cloud of Gloom Orange and pink blanketed the sky Cue: another is about to pass by To the train we’d greet, “Hi~!” The usual spots, yours and mine, Shrieked while we were on high Chat goes on ‘til the other said bye The next? No exemption! Pair of feet exercise in assumption Kinetic hands trap them in adoration Cloud 9 waltz in successive repetition Orange and pink blanketed the sky Cue: another is about to pass by To the train we’d greet, “Hi~!” The usual spot, mine, Am no longer able to occupy Only to find stranger’s beam so sly Thanks to her personality, voice like chime You and her turn buddies in no time While I stay on your side like a mime; That felt as if losing a dime That night insomnia attacked Your voices echoing made me whacked– A virus marched into the brain via hack Caused the insides to curse **** These insecurities plan no turning back Reality presented my fear: Your orbs wiggle while I am here When you did a scan for her Out crying one thing clear I’ve been replaced, my dear.
An incomplete poem which expressed the persona’s loneliness as she reminisce the past relationship she had (may it be a pal or a lover). The story was supposed to end on the third day with the persona’s friend no longer noticing her presence as soon as she spots her new found buddy. This act leads the persona to move a step back, thus unboarding the train before it dashes to its destination.
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Dec 18, 2016
Dec 18, 2016 at 4:17 PM UTC
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