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You hope that when you die, You will be promoted to some Playground in the sky. To live again for eternity. But how will you be seen? The 5 year old with scabby knees? Or 15 with a touch of acne? 25 with life laying ahead An 80 year old thinking of the dead? I hope you know none of this can be It just doesn't work, logically. I suppose you may mention the soul, Or patronise saying we will never know. Yet know this, None have come back to tell their tale. To save us the horror? Or not to ruin the show?
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Apr 19, 2015
Apr 19, 2015 at 5:40 PM UTC
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You hope that when you die, You will be promoted to some Playground in the sky. To live again for eternity. But how will you be seen? The 5 year old with scabby knees? Or 15 with a touch of acne? 25 with life laying ahead An 80 year old thinking of the dead? I hope you know none of this can be It just doesn't work, logically. I suppose you may mention the soul, Or patronise saying we will never know. Yet know this, None have come back to tell their tale. To save us the horror? Or not to ruin the show?
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Apr 19, 2015
Apr 19, 2015 at 5:40 PM UTC
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