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I like to visualize my death not as a grand moment fraught with TV-script intimations at sudden illumination while I’m encircled by a non-weepy sprinkling of the usual types: one surviving relative curious to see what I’ve got left to inherit; one forgotten friend dubious I hadn’t died quite some time ago; and one vengeful stranger anxious for the shock when I hear her unmask. No, I envision my death simply as the lonely release of a hardly noticeable puff, its minute droplets lifting to mix with every other ever breathed, and to bid adieu to my residue of befuddling puddles flecked by unresolved wants.
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Jul 12, 2010
Jul 12, 2010 at 2:32 PM UTC
Putting an end to this bad pun: There's no I in steam
I like to visualize my death not as a grand moment fraught with TV-script intimations at sudden illumination while I’m encircled by a non-weepy sprinkling of the usual types: one surviving relative curious to see what I’ve got left to inherit; one forgotten friend dubious I hadn’t died quite some time ago; and one vengeful stranger anxious for the shock when I hear her unmask. No, I envision my death simply as the lonely release of a hardly noticeable puff, its minute droplets lifting to mix with every other ever breathed, and to bid adieu to my residue of befuddling puddles flecked by unresolved wants.
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francis-scudellari
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Jul 12, 2010
Jul 12, 2010 at 2:32 PM UTC
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