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You have mistakes Not a lot you can do Seeing you is as seeing the moon it rises just to resemble you Your faults, they can defeat They measure up to be under 6 feet You're to good to be with earths grip The stars will quit when they see your glimpse Being there on earths moon Will be good only if I am with you She is the best thing that I have ever had I need no oxygen to make all this last
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May 1, 2013
May 1, 2013 at 2:44 PM UTC
Being There on Earth's Moon
You have mistakes Not a lot you can do Seeing you is as seeing the moon it rises just to resemble you Your faults, they can defeat They measure up to be under 6 feet You're to good to be with earths grip The stars will quit when they see your glimpse Being there on earths moon Will be good only if I am with you She is the best thing that I have ever had I need no oxygen to make all this last
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May 1, 2013
May 1, 2013 at 2:44 PM UTC
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