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hi sweetheart - i just have a few things to tell you (this won't take long). first, my shirt smells of you because you held me like more-than-friends. second, i smile for you because i heard you say "i love you" when i left today (even though i didn't hear you til i was halfway home). third, i am happier than i've ever been because you are something good, finally and right, finally, and you make me feel a whole list of ridiculous things: 5 years old, for one thing. pretty, for another. off-the-wall and utterly zany, which i always am, but in a different way with you. light-headed light-hearted light-everything - funny and sweet and teasing and teased. there are more things, things i do not know the names for, and which anyway i'm not sure i could say in a poem, or anywhere else. you, my best friend, who sat patiently through all the ******** and the ********** the not-worth-my-times and the he's-not-as-interested-in-you-as-you-think, who listened to me rant like it's my job, cry like it's my hobby, and laugh like i'm on narcotics, you, are the best thing ever. so one last thing: i want you to know (i'm telling you right now) if you ask me (and i know you'll ask me) don't you dare be scared out of your mind, like i would be, and don't you dare pretend not to be, like you would, because i'm going to say yes.
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Apr 21, 2012
Apr 21, 2012 at 1:15 PM UTC
if you ask me (a resounding -)
hi sweetheart - i just have a few things to tell you (this won't take long). first, my shirt smells of you because you held me like more-than-friends. second, i smile for you because i heard you say "i love you" when i left today (even though i didn't hear you til i was halfway home). third, i am happier than i've ever been because you are something good, finally and right, finally, and you make me feel a whole list of ridiculous things: 5 years old, for one thing. pretty, for another. off-the-wall and utterly zany, which i always am, but in a different way with you. light-headed light-hearted light-everything - funny and sweet and teasing and teased. there are more things, things i do not know the names for, and which anyway i'm not sure i could say in a poem, or anywhere else. you, my best friend, who sat patiently through all the ******** and the ********** the not-worth-my-times and the he's-not-as-interested-in-you-as-you-think, who listened to me rant like it's my job, cry like it's my hobby, and laugh like i'm on narcotics, you, are the best thing ever. so one last thing: i want you to know (i'm telling you right now) if you ask me (and i know you'll ask me) don't you dare be scared out of your mind, like i would be, and don't you dare pretend not to be, like you would, because i'm going to say yes.
maddie-3
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Apr 21, 2012
Apr 21, 2012 at 1:15 PM UTC
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