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In a field They set her down and named her, softly: Flower. They wanted Form to gather there, and Time to lock her hour. They said: Remain. Be visible. Be Something We can keep. For what is held belongs to Time, and what is Named, stays deep. and yet water knew no single clock no edge of then or more she did not measure what passed through her nor weighed upon a shore she warmed before the hand arrived moved on without a claim and touched the earth altered it beyond the mark of name beyond the reach of shame They called her selfish in her flow, They named her greedy, too, for keeping all her ways within, with naught for Them to view. They raised Their ledgers up to her, demanded she be still: “Take shape. Be held. Become complete. Submit yourself to will.” and yet water does not choose a form that time can close around it does not break the living stream by fixing what is found what passes through is not undone nor kept as something owned it lingers only as a warmth a memory untoned it was not flight nor turning back nor failure to remain a tenderness so absolute it couldn’t close to name For what is held becomes a Thing that Time will wear away. and what refuses being kept does not begin to stay
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Apr 22
Apr 22, 2026 at 6:49 PM UTC
The Water That Refused the Flower
In a field They set her down and named her, softly: Flower. They wanted Form to gather there, and Time to lock her hour. They said: Remain. Be visible. Be Something We can keep. For what is held belongs to Time, and what is Named, stays deep. and yet water knew no single clock no edge of then or more she did not measure what passed through her nor weighed upon a shore she warmed before the hand arrived moved on without a claim and touched the earth altered it beyond the mark of name beyond the reach of shame They called her selfish in her flow, They named her greedy, too, for keeping all her ways within, with naught for Them to view. They raised Their ledgers up to her, demanded she be still: “Take shape. Be held. Become complete. Submit yourself to will.” and yet water does not choose a form that time can close around it does not break the living stream by fixing what is found what passes through is not undone nor kept as something owned it lingers only as a warmth a memory untoned it was not flight nor turning back nor failure to remain a tenderness so absolute it couldn’t close to name For what is held becomes a Thing that Time will wear away. and what refuses being kept does not begin to stay
RastislavKnezi
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Apr 22
Apr 22, 2026 at 6:49 PM UTC
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