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~for the inestimable and yet, so oft underestimated, Lori Jones McCaffery ~ *"That was beautiful and I lived it with you." ^ tell-me, tell-me, he whispers so only ***** can hear: is there anything more, a simple poet could ask for, but an admission of someone revealing that your words, inculcated, enwrapped, flowered within, then carried them to you, and you to them? to sit beside me, on my unpillowed weathered throne, and imagine them imagining through eyes that read, shared your overflowing joyous insights of the outside domain, your sadness glorious at the end of a summer where you rediscovered, un~purposed, a mindfulness, from the early morning sun beams stinging you alive that together ***** the air from lungs exhaling, and this very breathe is the synapse of an actual consummation, transmigrating, transmuting, transforming a kindred soul to kin how glorious! no, there is nothing greater, but to ask: my dear, can you feel, taste my salted tears, Lori, as I kiss each of your hands for becoming/making/cresting & creating a bond of us?
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Sep 20, 2025
Sep 20, 2025 at 10:10 AM UTC
For LJM: "That was beautiful and I lived it with you."
~for the inestimable and yet, so oft underestimated, Lori Jones McCaffery ~ *"That was beautiful and I lived it with you." ^ tell-me, tell-me, he whispers so only ***** can hear: is there anything more, a simple poet could ask for, but an admission of someone revealing that your words, inculcated, enwrapped, flowered within, then carried them to you, and you to them? to sit beside me, on my unpillowed weathered throne, and imagine them imagining through eyes that read, shared your overflowing joyous insights of the outside domain, your sadness glorious at the end of a summer where you rediscovered, un~purposed, a mindfulness, from the early morning sun beams stinging you alive that together ***** the air from lungs exhaling, and this very breathe is the synapse of an actual consummation, transmigrating, transmuting, transforming a kindred soul to kin how glorious! no, there is nothing greater, but to ask: my dear, can you feel, taste my salted tears, Lori, as I kiss each of your hands for becoming/making/cresting & creating a bond of us?
^ Lori's comment u[on reading my https://hellopoetry.com/poem/5160178/just-another-last-day/ ^^ https://hellopoetry.com/poem/4769269/hp-writers-spotlight-lori-jones-mccaffery/
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14/M/all my life, an islander.
Sep 20, 2025
Sep 20, 2025 at 10:10 AM UTC
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