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do you hear the sizzle of my lungs as they slowly burn to ashes? my head is an anchor, weighing down bringing me to the floor i cannot breathe i am aching the doctor said i was fine but the moment i left and breathed in the poisonous fresh air i wheezed i could not breathe my lungs were on fire some people pretend im fine but i see it in their eyes how they’re pretending some people avoid me as to not get sick to save their freezing lungs the fire is spreading throughout my body my face is red my throat is burning im fading out my lungs are on fire i cannot breathe.
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Oct 28, 2024
Oct 28, 2024 at 8:42 PM UTC
On Fire, I Breathe
do you hear the sizzle of my lungs as they slowly burn to ashes? my head is an anchor, weighing down bringing me to the floor i cannot breathe i am aching the doctor said i was fine but the moment i left and breathed in the poisonous fresh air i wheezed i could not breathe my lungs were on fire some people pretend im fine but i see it in their eyes how they’re pretending some people avoid me as to not get sick to save their freezing lungs the fire is spreading throughout my body my face is red my throat is burning im fading out my lungs are on fire i cannot breathe.
this is my 130th poem, written on 10/28/24.
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15/F/USA
Oct 28, 2024
Oct 28, 2024 at 8:42 PM UTC
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