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Here I sit, completely alone, No company, except for the thoughts in my head. Those unassuring feelings wash over me, Like an immense wave of the ocean, Inviting me in harmlessly - or so i thought. The massive wave swallows me...   ... Then CRASH the wave slams against the sand.   There I go - turning, flipping, rolling and spinning - out of control. I can not control my mind.   It flips, it turns, it rolls, it spins, It is out of control, As I crash upon the sandy shore.   Even though I am trapped, I do not stop, I can not stop.   As the thoughts go deeper into my soul -   The crash hits harder Here I sit, completely alone, No company except for those thoughts in my head.
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Apr 7, 2014
Apr 7, 2014 at 8:51 PM UTC
Crash
Here I sit, completely alone, No company, except for the thoughts in my head. Those unassuring feelings wash over me, Like an immense wave of the ocean, Inviting me in harmlessly - or so i thought. The massive wave swallows me...   ... Then CRASH the wave slams against the sand.   There I go - turning, flipping, rolling and spinning - out of control. I can not control my mind.   It flips, it turns, it rolls, it spins, It is out of control, As I crash upon the sandy shore.   Even though I am trapped, I do not stop, I can not stop.   As the thoughts go deeper into my soul -   The crash hits harder Here I sit, completely alone, No company except for those thoughts in my head.
Even though this may not be considered a 'poem', I decided to write and share it for the fact that this is how I feel sometimes. I write to get my feelings out. I write to share to others my own personal struggles, thoughts, and feelings.
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Apr 7, 2014
Apr 7, 2014 at 8:51 PM UTC
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