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She tends her cactus garden, beads of perspiration, works with a maniacal absorption. One of many visitors she receives yet looking at each other's eyes dawned this quick realization; similar maniacal obsession and passion. A tornado she was, self created, in her swirl uprooted many huge trees, even tombstones by the sheer force unleashed, with her poetic flourish. Love of a crazy woman with effervescent creative  surge, is a magical portion brewed by a witch , in her forbidden rituals, night after dark night. Injured by conjugal lust, unrequited prompted to walk the garden path holding hands of lovers, one after the other, who took her to wilderness, deeper and deeper and at the end to a blind alley, life was a tribal dance, from where return was impossible. She never had to apologize to her mate, who for all the world to see, remained  with her till he went behind the curtain. Imagine a life, a walk through a cactus garden,where sharp thorns would nip, searing pain and bleeding has its moments of exhilaration. Life pulsated wildly for her on such notions, (There were many who walked with her for each adventure) They met, poetry flowed like wine, she had a rare warmth seen in women of such creative combinations, she feared nothing, but  her truth made many squirm. Midnight dances of her and her friends gypsy bunch, attained such fame.But all ended in a great  betrayal, she was deep down a naive woman, craving for love, to immerse in it. On occasions she would change identities at will, she was one but many there wasn't any one like her before or after. They would walk through the witch's cactus patch, somnambulists reciting poems, when they are together, in private, cactus spine criss- crossed his skin her nail wrote poems on the back of the lover of the moment, each one bled like soldiers in combat. One monsoon night brought everything to an end, the cactus garden was trampled by big grey wolves, the journey met with an abrupt end. What is she, cactus herself, vampire, witch, lover indefatigable, with the heart of a lion? Erotomaniacal  poetic surge, yet a fantasy in flesh and blood? **They buried her in a cactus garden away from town not even ten people arrived to mourn, not even all her lovers, had time that afternoon. Her songs of pain, pierced hearts and they still shed tears, cactus garden, it was--- the metaphor perfected by her life and death.**
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Jun 6, 2013
Jun 6, 2013 at 12:44 PM UTC
In Her Cactus Garden
She tends her cactus garden, beads of perspiration, works with a maniacal absorption. One of many visitors she receives yet looking at each other's eyes dawned this quick realization; similar maniacal obsession and passion. A tornado she was, self created, in her swirl uprooted many huge trees, even tombstones by the sheer force unleashed, with her poetic flourish. Love of a crazy woman with effervescent creative  surge, is a magical portion brewed by a witch , in her forbidden rituals, night after dark night. Injured by conjugal lust, unrequited prompted to walk the garden path holding hands of lovers, one after the other, who took her to wilderness, deeper and deeper and at the end to a blind alley, life was a tribal dance, from where return was impossible. She never had to apologize to her mate, who for all the world to see, remained  with her till he went behind the curtain. Imagine a life, a walk through a cactus garden,where sharp thorns would nip, searing pain and bleeding has its moments of exhilaration. Life pulsated wildly for her on such notions, (There were many who walked with her for each adventure) They met, poetry flowed like wine, she had a rare warmth seen in women of such creative combinations, she feared nothing, but  her truth made many squirm. Midnight dances of her and her friends gypsy bunch, attained such fame.But all ended in a great  betrayal, she was deep down a naive woman, craving for love, to immerse in it. On occasions she would change identities at will, she was one but many there wasn't any one like her before or after. They would walk through the witch's cactus patch, somnambulists reciting poems, when they are together, in private, cactus spine criss- crossed his skin her nail wrote poems on the back of the lover of the moment, each one bled like soldiers in combat. One monsoon night brought everything to an end, the cactus garden was trampled by big grey wolves, the journey met with an abrupt end. What is she, cactus herself, vampire, witch, lover indefatigable, with the heart of a lion? Erotomaniacal  poetic surge, yet a fantasy in flesh and blood? **They buried her in a cactus garden away from town not even ten people arrived to mourn, not even all her lovers, had time that afternoon. Her songs of pain, pierced hearts and they still shed tears, cactus garden, it was--- the metaphor perfected by her life and death.**
She was an enigma, as a poet reached unattinable cult status in a society so conservative; was first to be featured by international media, from India,died the death of an unknown orphan, by the quirk of fate.
k-balachandran
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Jun 6, 2013
Jun 6, 2013 at 12:44 PM UTC
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