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it’s about to rain, and I don’t know how to feel about that. I used to like those signs of an oncoming afternoon shower: the sun shines a little brighter, at first. I suppose it knows it is being upstaged, so it kicks out a few extra rays underneath the pressure only to be overshadowed by clouds as they inch their way center-stage. I can smell the rain. I know I’m not the only one, but I like to pretend, sometimes, that I am. And I also know I’m not the only one stuck with this all-too-cliche’ feeling — this aching, gnawing sensation that reminds me of what I already know:              that I, too, am fading out. And I guess, I, like the sun just before an afternoon rain, know that I'll soon be upstaged, too. So, here I am - kicking out a few of my own rays just before I buckle underneath the pressure         of all these ******* clouds.
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Mar 26, 2012
Mar 26, 2012 at 6:49 AM UTC
.it's better to burn out.
it’s about to rain, and I don’t know how to feel about that. I used to like those signs of an oncoming afternoon shower: the sun shines a little brighter, at first. I suppose it knows it is being upstaged, so it kicks out a few extra rays underneath the pressure only to be overshadowed by clouds as they inch their way center-stage. I can smell the rain. I know I’m not the only one, but I like to pretend, sometimes, that I am. And I also know I’m not the only one stuck with this all-too-cliche’ feeling — this aching, gnawing sensation that reminds me of what I already know:              that I, too, am fading out. And I guess, I, like the sun just before an afternoon rain, know that I'll soon be upstaged, too. So, here I am - kicking out a few of my own rays just before I buckle underneath the pressure         of all these ******* clouds.
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Mar 26, 2012
Mar 26, 2012 at 6:49 AM UTC
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