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the smoke was a litany given free range to roam to condense with water into soil eating time the wet earth always wet under your father’s feet & your feet the smoke was everywhere growing further towards the road to the neighbor’s willow under its pendulous branches The wet earth always wet underneath your grief and your family’s grief gave birth to a speck of light so dense rows of feet over wet earth greet you ask you, to take another step forward
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May 24
May 24, 2026 at 6:41 PM UTC
Wet Earth
the smoke was a litany given free range to roam to condense with water into soil eating time the wet earth always wet under your father’s feet & your feet the smoke was everywhere growing further towards the road to the neighbor’s willow under its pendulous branches The wet earth always wet underneath your grief and your family’s grief gave birth to a speck of light so dense rows of feet over wet earth greet you ask you, to take another step forward
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33/Los Angeles, CA
May 24
May 24, 2026 at 6:41 PM UTC
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