The hills play with the clouds
then in thunderous spasm
the heavens erupt
and the rain fills the chasm

jurgen

Wetter

Jurgen, I love the imagery here!&nbsp;&nbsp;I would suggest reading it aloud and then tweaking so you have a better rhythm/flow.

Looks good!&nbsp;&nbsp;I feel that you've painted a fine picture.

Jurgen, I like the poem quite a bit, do you think the title does it justice?