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Falling with shoe laces undone, Only whispers, the quietness amidst grandiosity, majesty life beyond me The tragedy is, I am melancholy, the family Who don't know quiet, they judge often, they Need control over each other, competition is so powerful No silence, so love cannot grow, it is cheapened by talk, talking, exhchange,  The children crave approval The parents crave limitless pride, Everyone is disappointed, the gift merits more control The mountain is not of character, rather it is God, only understood Amidst the silence I can feel the poem in my forehead Stop editing, pull it out of you Ermine dire Sanctus, Jesus burning in cackling solidarity tainted , save me, I surrender, take it, tear off the sarcasm, show me your light, your beauty Too intense for the public, only known in silence, the majesty of great nature, the objective world, the spirit of chaos, ******** and spitting, unwrapping, giggling, ******* ******* sizing, ughhh putrid ugly hierarchical idiocy act, urching and lurching felt so secretly, brutality, eating its way out of the stocking, crispy toffee, Buddhist books that will never be read, shaving kids, raging!  Hurting, false gratitude, let it out!  Romping, stomping, groping for lustrous pious godless lurch, ****** through my pallet, based on experience, wreaking, cleansing
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Jan 25, 2015
Jan 25, 2015 at 9:46 AM UTC
The poem for Yosemite wow I just read it again this *****
Falling with shoe laces undone, Only whispers, the quietness amidst grandiosity, majesty life beyond me The tragedy is, I am melancholy, the family Who don't know quiet, they judge often, they Need control over each other, competition is so powerful No silence, so love cannot grow, it is cheapened by talk, talking, exhchange,  The children crave approval The parents crave limitless pride, Everyone is disappointed, the gift merits more control The mountain is not of character, rather it is God, only understood Amidst the silence I can feel the poem in my forehead Stop editing, pull it out of you Ermine dire Sanctus, Jesus burning in cackling solidarity tainted , save me, I surrender, take it, tear off the sarcasm, show me your light, your beauty Too intense for the public, only known in silence, the majesty of great nature, the objective world, the spirit of chaos, ******** and spitting, unwrapping, giggling, ******* ******* sizing, ughhh putrid ugly hierarchical idiocy act, urching and lurching felt so secretly, brutality, eating its way out of the stocking, crispy toffee, Buddhist books that will never be read, shaving kids, raging!  Hurting, false gratitude, let it out!  Romping, stomping, groping for lustrous pious godless lurch, ****** through my pallet, based on experience, wreaking, cleansing
Seanzy
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Jan 25, 2015
Jan 25, 2015 at 9:46 AM UTC
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