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I'm static, I'm stuck, I'm riding the deck, In silence, I'm eternally seeking port. I miss the wife and kiddies. The waves are stilled now. Although their crests are tipped with white. There's not a bird or shark in sight. I can't even smell the sea. I'm picked up and examined, Closely inspected, by the old sea dog, in the tatty tweed suit, through his right eye, using his monocle He puts me down and creeps away, moaning at the assistant, that's much too expensive, I'll have to leave it for today. Next thing I see is a manic child, with his mum, he's running wild. Hey nipper leave that alone, Crash, Air swamps me, As the shop assistant with the dustpan and brush, sweeps me up. Wraps me in a newspaper page, throws me in the re-cycle bin, What will become of me, one thing's for certain, now I'm free. (C) Livvi
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Sep 14, 2014
Sep 14, 2014 at 10:20 AM UTC
CHARITY SHOP SHIP
I'm static, I'm stuck, I'm riding the deck, In silence, I'm eternally seeking port. I miss the wife and kiddies. The waves are stilled now. Although their crests are tipped with white. There's not a bird or shark in sight. I can't even smell the sea. I'm picked up and examined, Closely inspected, by the old sea dog, in the tatty tweed suit, through his right eye, using his monocle He puts me down and creeps away, moaning at the assistant, that's much too expensive, I'll have to leave it for today. Next thing I see is a manic child, with his mum, he's running wild. Hey nipper leave that alone, Crash, Air swamps me, As the shop assistant with the dustpan and brush, sweeps me up. Wraps me in a newspaper page, throws me in the re-cycle bin, What will become of me, one thing's for certain, now I'm free. (C) Livvi
Inspired by a ship in a bottle at my local charity shop!
olivia-kent
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Sep 14, 2014
Sep 14, 2014 at 10:20 AM UTC
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