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A cigarette that promises to satisfy but turns to ash, A nicotine addiction that promises to be harmless but inflicts damage, Lungs that promise to help you breathe but leave you gasping for air, An "I'll always be here" that "is never there" A gardener that never waters his rose, and so the rose dies without proper care.
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Sep 11, 2016
Sep 11, 2016 at 12:35 AM UTC
Metaphors I'd Hate For You To Be:
A cigarette that promises to satisfy but turns to ash, A nicotine addiction that promises to be harmless but inflicts damage, Lungs that promise to help you breathe but leave you gasping for air, An "I'll always be here" that "is never there" A gardener that never waters his rose, and so the rose dies without proper care.
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Sep 11, 2016
Sep 11, 2016 at 12:35 AM UTC
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