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You left me feeling bare naked even when I was clothed The look you gave me The instant connected feelings left me feeling halved when you looked away It left me bare naked And I felt the draft you left behind The feeling was so strong it made me want to cover up everything I could see he saw my whole story And I saw his too We left each other bare We left each other chilled and afraid of being vulnerable And we had only walked past each other on the subway
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Jun 19, 2014
Jun 19, 2014 at 9:37 AM UTC
Bare
You left me feeling bare naked even when I was clothed The look you gave me The instant connected feelings left me feeling halved when you looked away It left me bare naked And I felt the draft you left behind The feeling was so strong it made me want to cover up everything I could see he saw my whole story And I saw his too We left each other bare We left each other chilled and afraid of being vulnerable And we had only walked past each other on the subway
I have never been on a subway..hm
Chalsey
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22/Two-Spirit/American
Jun 19, 2014
Jun 19, 2014 at 9:37 AM UTC
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