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I remember for less than a blink of an eye a majestic V of forested slope Far below it A tiny stream blue from the sky Two low roofs a yellow patch of sun drenched beach My fingers rasping across the wood in a desperate effort and then I stood alone in a cold and rain swept night A ticket *Good, when validated, for one trip to Verna* Behind it a date, gone, long since, the ticket void, punched in a pattern of tiny holes
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Oct 21, 2013
Oct 21, 2013 at 6:59 PM UTC
A world shrugged
I remember for less than a blink of an eye a majestic V of forested slope Far below it A tiny stream blue from the sky Two low roofs a yellow patch of sun drenched beach My fingers rasping across the wood in a desperate effort and then I stood alone in a cold and rain swept night A ticket *Good, when validated, for one trip to Verna* Behind it a date, gone, long since, the ticket void, punched in a pattern of tiny holes
I read the story, "Of Missing Persons" by Jack Finney. A very similar read to "Atlas Shrugged" hence the title. I won't take credit for this poem, since I have used much of the story. But a beautiful write nonetheless. Wonderful day today. Better than most.. hope you had a good day too  :)
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Oct 21, 2013
Oct 21, 2013 at 6:59 PM UTC
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