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*The hint of mint, on her lips, had an offer to which my tongue, quickly said 'yes'* The scent of an unknown flower on her flowing hair, took me from there, to the mountain slope in my mindscape, beside which I had painted, her picture to make it, perfect, against gentle foaming light. The moment was tender, pulsating, her hands were, creepers coiling around my trunk, in a flurry, not to swoon, soon. Isn't it the moment, described always by  poets, all through ages, as the feeling of wafting above the fluffy clouds? But hey, I never thought, I could be swayed so easily, like this: made of sterner stuff, could withstand the onslaught of such moments, I thought of myself. **But, eyes don't see, ears can't hear, nose looses its sense of smell, I feel a thrill beyond, the prompting of five senses, to get in to the flow of the nature's immense will to find the reason, of my existence, and vanquish, the fear of all fears, and be immortal, liberate both of us, from the mortal coil, with the oracular, power love fills, in our beings in such moments.**
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Aug 3, 2012
Aug 3, 2012 at 10:53 AM UTC
The Moment
*The hint of mint, on her lips, had an offer to which my tongue, quickly said 'yes'* The scent of an unknown flower on her flowing hair, took me from there, to the mountain slope in my mindscape, beside which I had painted, her picture to make it, perfect, against gentle foaming light. The moment was tender, pulsating, her hands were, creepers coiling around my trunk, in a flurry, not to swoon, soon. Isn't it the moment, described always by  poets, all through ages, as the feeling of wafting above the fluffy clouds? But hey, I never thought, I could be swayed so easily, like this: made of sterner stuff, could withstand the onslaught of such moments, I thought of myself. **But, eyes don't see, ears can't hear, nose looses its sense of smell, I feel a thrill beyond, the prompting of five senses, to get in to the flow of the nature's immense will to find the reason, of my existence, and vanquish, the fear of all fears, and be immortal, liberate both of us, from the mortal coil, with the oracular, power love fills, in our beings in such moments.**
Daily love.net Monday, July18, 2011
k-balachandran
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Aug 3, 2012
Aug 3, 2012 at 10:53 AM UTC
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